He now was sitting in a small pool of his victim's blood. Admiring its feel, like thick, scarlet, butter that had been heated just enough to melt. Small rain droplets began to patter loudly around the lillypads on the lake, diluting Carl's little pool. In frustration, he beat the ground with his small paws, causing little pockets of water to hydroplane outwards. His actions were those of a small child's as his playground of death became obscured from the dying sun's rays of gold. Suddenly, he summoned with a nod a small frog who had been staring intently, to come forward. Amidst cries of woe from his community, the little one shuffled across the grass to the infernal being infront of him.
"Come, little one. Do not be frightened." whispered Carl loudly, over the rain.
"I am not afraid of you, oh tyrant. For if I was, then I should be quaking from tongue, to tail." answered the tiny amphibian.
"Hah Hah Hah," laughed Carl. "You are brave for your size. Let us see if you can sing as well as you can speak." The small one looked terrorized, but Carl didn't notice. He was preparing to sing.
Carl started off on a folk song from the place that he was born. After a while, he stoped singing, and focused on the little frog.
"Now you try."
"I...I can't." The little frog looked into Carl's fiery eyes and saw himself. He saw what was, what is, and what could have been had fate not taken his life. He fell to the blood stained grass before anyone knew that he was dead. A soft sigh of grief escaped the animals that had assembled to hear Carl sing. The fish in the lake swam sadly back to their solitary lives. The rest of the frogs looked away as Carl devoured his prey.
Stories would be told. This day would be remembered. But many would soon forget. The tales would warp old fishes minds. Insanity would be nailed over a more sensible floor. But someone, somewhere, would retain a fragment, a small strand of hope, of reason, that would lead them away. Away from their home, and their life of misery. Away from the blood lust that killed their friends, their family, and their sanity. Where is this place? Where none kill each other? It is easy to find. But you must kill Carl, the Scarlet Butter Turtle with your bare hands. He must die. A poisoned mouse, or a beheaded chicken. It's in FATE's hands.
1 comment:
Very interesting first sentence. really pulled me in.
I get what you're saying here, but the wording isn't right, "The air was misted with blood, as the pools sunk slowly into the ground."
Very nice, "His shell covered his spiked haunches and back, like a newly ordained monk."
I would take out "of gold" here: "His actions were those of a small child's as his playground of death became obscured from the dying sun's rays of gold."
The imagery is great, but I'm left confused by the story.
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